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Governed By Excuses

oh little lad energetic and promising hopeful and full of potential do you stay all day long in the sea not to get hot or eat uncooked meat just not to get burnt? You remit heavily on the escape route while avoiding paying your dues keeping tabs with valuable consistency keeps you totally amused. Oh my boy! Responsibilities? Just no where near your views. The pathway to wealth, you love, but the journey you accuse. Discovering a new engagement you'll still avoid, using your bank of news. Why does fate or God's will signify your life's fuse? Remember that the mercy of luck is only a temporary messeuse. In the world of fairy tales you'll inevitably be excused you want to continue this until all your options are used? Then be ready! You, misfortune will abuse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/27/2014 5:12:00 PM
Hey Funom!! :) "Governed by Excuses", perhaps guarded and guided by reason? There is lots to ponder, much to absorb. "A bank of news"...interests might be high and overwhelming. Today after going out, opening the door to my car I could hear someone playing the flute. Possibly une flûte traversière. If it had been foggy outside it would have sounded eerie; bright and sunny, it felt peaceful and happy. Keep well, stay happy! Mikki
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/28/2014 7:37:00 AM
Thank you so much for your view and interest in my page... I have always been anticipating your comments on my recent pieces... I hope you come by to check them.

Book: Shattered Sighs