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I feel like writing some material To see if it's for real Desperation setting in Knocking me out like at the beginning Trespassing, on the intrusive messaging Who am I fooling ? If only my thoughts were elusive Maybe then I wouldn't be so exclusive Should not stop my verses, Can't handle these curses Like my passion for hot nurses Who ain't got 10 purses I breathe eventually and recap on my story, From point A to point B Yoyo-ing through the commotion Of accepting that you know you may know nothing Confusing? That's my thing Who wants to over complicate? Not me mate. I've been talking for a while now Like I took a vow To keep up the beat And make it hit it deep;

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Date: 4/20/2024 3:42:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/20/2016 4:44:00 AM
I agree with Andrea it is penned in a rap form - great rhyme Stefan:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/20/2017 1:11:00 AM
TY Jan
Date: 7/24/2016 5:06:00 PM
I enjoyed this one. It felt a bit rappish!! (I made that word up. Rappy?? ) Thanks for visiting my poetry.
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Date: 7/26/2016 2:07:00 AM
Ty Andrea. :) Much appreciated. You know what we can make it a word lol.
Date: 6/23/2016 10:11:00 PM
Stefan, good to see you boosting poetry. LINDA
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Date: 7/7/2016 10:37:00 PM
Quite the compliment! Thx
Date: 6/22/2016 9:55:00 AM
When poetry sounds like rap...all that's missing is the beat. a little non- sensical but fun to read.
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Date: 6/22/2016 6:47:00 AM
To write is to write, I like this honest form you took. Skat
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Date: 7/7/2016 10:36:00 PM
ty
Date: 6/22/2016 6:41:00 AM
Like the freestyling mate.
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Date: 7/7/2016 10:36:00 PM
thx mate

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