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Gothic Trilogy the Red Rose of the Cross

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She held a knife over my heart and feasted upon my emotions My blood flowed through her veins She was insane, beautifully insane I devoured her visions She devoured my soul An axe slices my neck My head rolls towards an empty tomorrow My dreams have been stolen In a coffin of unspoken silence Run run run, escape the pain Headless I join her Totally insane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/14/2015 3:47:00 PM
I think I've totally gone off my head reading this... now for part 3 xx :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 2/8/2015 12:33:00 PM
Always feels like that looking back, if you survive it. Many a man has joined in and never wished to leave. I've seen that before myself. Some like the insanity! A7 and a delight to read this creative trilogy!
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Date: 2/8/2015 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Robert, this was all purely fiction, I myself like peace and quiet, and no drama!
Date: 2/8/2015 10:41:00 AM
Gives me a picture of a dominant wife who wants to change who you are into who they want you to be...never ends well
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Date: 2/8/2015 3:13:00 PM
Well this more on the totally insane side of things!
Date: 2/7/2015 10:38:00 PM
Ohh my, so very different .....Seren
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Date: 2/7/2015 10:40:00 PM
sure different in an insane kinda way!
Date: 2/7/2015 9:16:00 PM
ooohhh....
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Date: 2/7/2015 9:24:00 PM
ahhhhhhh ohhhhh

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