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unrhymed tercets 

Twilight dawning eyes open as the heather bleat sings Into the coming night's dream Crickets ticking away in the long grass swaying thoughts drunken sailor sails time stands still for a moment peace Falsely promises defaced As meaningless flowers wither Where inside silence hides the guiding truth Behind a mask consumed cowering away seeds Crocodile tears Planted inside another's hurt falls guilty within the pain that kisses the burning fire Where everything is twisted ill to suit Dressed up as something real where caring becomes the least important gesture It's here where the barriers fall shut Sharing stops when condemning bites with hate filled ideas Communication dies away were hidden agendas lay A bridge over troubled waters to cross this divide rocky desert winds howl Storm in a teacup stirring That someone created friction for no good reason or another clouds descend heavy laden To feel good about themselves hurting another love They become the stepping stone unto pain inflicted grief Reflections ripple casting shadows of doubt over

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/23/2016 3:08:00 AM
Heartbreaking write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/22/2016 2:09:00 PM
Very deep, Liam...And very powerful - Nicely expressed! My best regards! :) john P.s An obvious seven.
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Date: 8/21/2016 3:19:00 PM
Hi Liam! Wow!Wow!This is a very sad, profound n' heartbreaking poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.So deeply sad n' heartfelt and I can feel your pain all the way in this piece too.All so very beautifully written in all its sadness and it makes me so very sad and it breaks my own heart in pieces just thinking of anyone hurting you in any way in the past, present or at any time Liam.Just praying here now more that you're really okay today and that no one has hurt you again in any way or form. Excellent piece!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot that you're really okay in everything,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you here in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very peaceful n' lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 8/21/2016 2:19:00 PM
- Liam, a heart that bleeds - wounded deep into the soul - A heartbreaking poem, it's great written .... but, makes me thoughtful and sad - Hope all is well with you and your loved ones :) - I wish you a beautiful new week :) - and ........ Congratulations on our p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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