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Goodnight Soupers

Music from her bangles, sleepless night now waiting, another moonlight sonata, goodnight. ===================== By:kashinath karmakar NOT FOR CONTEST

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/6/2011 5:15:00 PM

This was a smooth write, Kash! & advanced happy birthday to you! :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 10:29:00 PM

this is beautiful, Kash. Let's go see if the "right" one was any better. haha.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2011 12:37:00 PM

kashi, this is breathtaking.. line 2 needs 2 words only, line 4 needs 4 words.. oh what the heck.. i am n love with this....night, night.. come visit! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/9/2011 12:01:00 PM

very sweet music Kash.. luv the bangles here and in other piece too luv.. do soupers ever sleep? oh just a thought luv.. nice...

Jack Horne

Date: 9/9/2011 10:12:00 AM

I thought you were announcing you were leaving the Soup for a moment, Kash! Very sweet piece

Kash Poet

Date: 9/9/2011 6:28:00 AM

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