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Goodnight Or Goodbye

when I am back between you and my corner and you look at me like that is when I lose the illusion of being anything more to you than an object I never know with you goodnight or goodbye it would not suit your mouth to frown at my tributes or to purse at my seriousness I know this well but I wish to never see you laugh at me again which will it be goodnight or goodbye if one of my breaths were to rise warmly through your pressing fingers it would fog up your windows as they always were toward the dusk of winter goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 10/1/2011 9:38:00 AM
Ah yes, when it's time to move on. I think of those times and the sadness of thinking what could have been. We can be such fools at times. This is really good insight and presented in a way I can relate to. And who likes to be laughed at? I sure don't.
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