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Goodnight Moonlight

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Goodnight Moonlight

I say goodnight as the moon shines bright.
 The light shines upon your eyes, and reflects the tears that run down your face... 
I wish I could wipe them away, 
but sadly nothing ever stays.

Though it’s dark, I can still see.
 No matter how far you may be, look at the stars and see me mentally. 
The stars flow across the sky like slow flying fireflies.  
I feel like all you have told me was lies. 

I try to make myself and you feel the best. 
Sometimes I feel like giving it a rest. 
I never see you; wish I could be with you. 
You may not love me but I still feel for you. 

No matter what choice you make, let it not be a mistake nor regret.
 My mind has been set. From the day we met until now,
 the moon still shines bright along with the stars, so close yet so far away…
I’m missing you everyday

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  1. Date: 2/14/2011 6:17:00 PM
    lovely ending, it sounds so beautiful, enjoyed this one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 4:18:00 PM
    Although some of your lines are longer than they should be, this poem delivers decent descriptiveness with some good rhyming.

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 4:14:00 PM
    This poem describes someone who is in a love quandary. My favorite line is-"look at the stars and see me mentally"-Hope your Valentine's was great.