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Goodbye Then

Goodbye then. We have closed the book and replaced it on the shelf. Dog eared pages straightened. Tens of thousands of words read, spoken, stored for posterity. Goodbye then. No longer a working title, but an archive which will gather dust in the annals of time. Maybe one day to be discovered, like some ancient tomb. Goodbye then. Remember when we began the story? The newness, the excitement and anticipation at what would unfold. Spellbound by adventure, mesmerized by speculation as each word became exposed. Goodbye then. All done. Story complete. No more surprises, just the anticlimax of finality. The eerie silence of conclusion. A lingering pause, one last look, a smile - The end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/12/2010 11:43:00 AM
Well, that pretty much sums it up ... smile ... great analogy using a book and the story many of us can tell ... excellent writing here, Helen !!
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Date: 1/12/2010 9:13:00 AM
Congrats Helen on the feature. Ending to a love story beautifully written. Vince
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:51:00 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Helen >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 10:34:00 AM
it is like saying goodbye to a very dear friend. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with me, Helen. Lainie
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Helen. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:55:00 PM
Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:47:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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