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Goodbye Sorrow

A solemn smile upon my face While walking down these halls Yet no one knows the hurt and pain Nor can see my broken walls A yearn to recieve a tight embrace Someone close to touch But everyone seems so far away Can't seem to grasp or clutch My head is filled with aches and pain My eyes sting from the tears My life will never return the same From these dark, cold, relentless years I fear for my eternity The death of my soul behold I long to return to my old personality But seem's like it's on hold Afraid to turn left or right I say these words and cry Alone left out in the dark night One last sorrowful goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/15/2011 7:05:00 AM
Beautifully written. Your words flow straight to the heart. The emotions you display are brought forth so real to us. That takes talent to talk so eloquently from the heart.
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Date: 5/1/2011 7:15:00 PM
Your poem touched my heart. I like the lines "I long to return to my old personality, but seems like it's on hold". Sounds like you are either at a crossroad in life or something keeps you from growing. That's what I'm hearing anyway. Nicely written.
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Date: 5/1/2011 5:55:00 PM
PLEASE COMMENT!!!! :) THANKS
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