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Goodbye Im Gone

On my knees I kneel and pray Forgiveness from you today What I done was truly wrong Your time now I won’t prolong How stupid I was and foolish too That sad sad day that I wed you (7th in contest,’ Apology Accepted’, by Barbara Gorelick)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/2/2012 6:53:00 PM
Eamon.. it is nice to read this oldie and goody couplet. :-) congrats with your wonderful win,, in the "APOLOGY ACCEPTED" contest.. always~ PD
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Date: 1/7/2011 11:40:00 AM
Very good. Very good sir. I love the punch at the end. Congratulations. Best wishes, Deb
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Date: 1/2/2011 7:30:00 PM
Thanks for the comments, Eamon. Congrats on the win in Barb's contest. And a Happy New Year to you. ....Jimmy
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Date: 12/31/2010 9:45:00 AM
really?? congrats on your win Eamon, it's great
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Date: 12/31/2010 8:28:00 AM
Eamon what an interesting apology.. Congratulations on your win in BG's contest! Happy 2011 to you and yours ;-)
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Date: 12/31/2010 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Eamon in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Apology Accepted". Love Carol
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Date: 12/31/2010 6:17:00 AM
Congrats Eamon on your well deserved win and wish u a very HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Date: 12/31/2010 5:21:00 AM
Congrats Eamon on your wonderful win in the Apology Accepted contest with this incredible entry my friend... enjoy your top spot for a top notch entry ..with luv.. and again H.N.Y..too..
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Date: 12/30/2010 10:06:00 PM
Congratulations on tongue in the cheek apology and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:39:00 PM
I coulndt decide whether this was funny or sad..but I loved it. Congrats on your 7th place in my contest. BG
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Date: 12/28/2010 2:12:00 PM
Revisiting this one becuase I liked it so much. I just did mine and I copied your style, of three couplets. You helped me get inspired to think of what to write about!
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:36:00 AM
That was a surprise ending! :) Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/27/2010 10:28:00 PM
this is excellently witty!! I hope it scores! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/27/2010 2:32:00 PM
This sort of made me sad, sad.... well hurray to new beginnings.. best of luck in the contest~~
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