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Goodbye

Ticking lke a time bomb Nothing is right Never will be For the ones I love And the ones I hate Take this time Do not hesitate For I will be gone Sooner then you think My life will only be a memory Nothing more Nothing less I wish you farewell Now I lay me down to rest With this knife into my chest

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Date: 6/29/2013 10:33:00 PM
thank you
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Date: 6/29/2013 10:10:00 PM
Powerful piece! Intense well written!! :)
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Date: 5/13/2013 3:53:00 AM
Powerful indeed...
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Date: 5/8/2013 4:16:00 PM
Hi Cara, for this one I have for this one I hate. powerful thoughts. Your poem is dark and should be the final message we should endorse on our graves... I love the poem...xox~ Linda
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Cara Paynter
Date: 6/29/2013 10:34:00 PM
I have a new poem finally!!!

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