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Goodbye

He came. Death came. Death reached out for her soul but she fought, she fought hard. I am sure she wanted to stay alive so bad. She wanted to stand. I helped her up. She said she wanted to sleep, we didn't want her to but she was too weak. We pressed on the peddle but we were too late, then a second was like a week . I was afraid cause I knew she might not last the night. Yeah that right. She was too weak but still, she tried to fight. R.I.P to the one I lost. To the ones we lost.

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Date: 8/15/2023 4:49:00 AM
Hello, Christian first I'll say your poem is "free Verse" almost "prose" style I like - "I was afraid cause I knew she might not last the night. Yeah that right. She was too weak but still, she tried to fight." good job - loads of imagery too! Thank You - stay safe
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Christian Adeyemi
Date: 8/31/2023 9:45:00 AM
Thanks a lot!
Date: 10/17/2020 2:56:00 AM
Heartbreaking...
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Christian Adeyemi
Date: 8/31/2023 9:47:00 AM
Yeah it is, could still feel the pain.

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