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Goodbye, Hello

Make sure to start the new dawn clean
Do not let the Evil become between
Always make the “Good-byes” your best one
You never know if another “Hello” you’ve won

Though busy time you must be careful of your voice
Make sure of your words of choice
Always make the “Good-byes” your best one
You never know if another “Hello” you’ve won

Validate, validate make sure to appreciate
This is how to support emotions delicate
Always make the “Good-byes” your best one
You never know if another “Hello” you’ve won

Touching, kissing, loving, hugging
Make sure to acknowledge that tiny little tugging
Always make the “Good-byes” your best one
Do you know if another “Hello” you’ve won?

©Holly P. Moore
   December 2012

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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 8:13:00 PM
    what an interesting theme for a ghazal poem. I have not tried this form in a long time. It sure looks a lot like a kyrielle to me! Very nice, Holly. I enjoyed the read.

    Date: 12/10/2012 5:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    According to PS forms, I've written my ghazal and my kyrielle (has a religious refrain), correctly. But, upon research, I think this is actually a kyrielle. Which means what is my kyrielle? And, why does PS state that a kyrielle should have a religious reference?And, a ghazal does not have a particular theme. Just 2 rhyming couplets and a refrain..SM me...Hugs, xxoo Holly
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:26:00 PM
    What a great take on greetings and goodbyes, Holly, and the vehicle for this poem is new for me...a positive upbeat message within! I do appreciate your comments on my autumn dodoitsu...I wanted to set the tone of happiness so I included those elements that demonstrate it to me...parades and classical music! We must think alike, u are right! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:06:00 AM
    Holly great words and a lovely refrain, very well done and good luck....David

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:58:00 AM
    Positive inspiring piece my dear Holly... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:21:00 AM
    Oh this is so inspiring, Holly, the sincerity glows here in this, a wonderful poem..

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:58:00 AM
    I am so honored to be the first to comment, this is an absolutely beautiful piece, I feel the warmth of your heart. I am sure your son is smiling in appreciation for these special words you have shared.