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Goodby Morning Person

GOODBYE MORNING PERSON Sit up Stretch Yawn Head quite empty Woozy No remembered dreams Before anything else COFFEE! It’s the cats and me Squeaky teeth Sponge bath or shower Shave Nothing profound Just life Just plain naked On the avenue (back of my mind) wheels haven’t started their daily spin The weather channel (with its mindless music) A neighborhood feel – what goes on next door in the WORLD! Yes! now it begins It’s a neighborhood thing Cannot be helped – it starts An up-and-down-the-block thing Mentally I’m out the door There are streets avenues stores a mall Something is alive out there The conviction strangely eases With the first taste I start to function And function is what it’s all about ask any newscaster Realizing this “function” it eases There is some ridiculous wholeness some sanity The night? the dream? unreal! By noon all is GO! Another drag-ass day I am this other person this programmed stiff The morning person is distant I do not even want to recall that jelly Some formula has taken hold has been in the veins all along Yes! the VEINS! There are numbers flowing Problems with no answers Problems kicked aside The “ME” has taken over Unashamed Fully astrut Going down the same uniform avenues Feeling the same guilt same lust Same unstoppable drive Goodbye morning person

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/2/2010 3:20:00 AM
Hi Dave & Super belated Happy Birthday btw :) Just have to love this write of yours, very witty--I am such a night owl as well it's not funny sometimes ;) but ok, I love mornings, I love mornings... ;)
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Date: 8/1/2010 8:37:00 PM
OH! DAVER~ u sure R. What I would WAke up to. A Smiley moon. GOT some Coffee~SKAT
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Date: 7/30/2010 4:39:00 AM
you are always very clever Daver, i enjoyed the way you ended your poem,, smiles and a chuckle... What a path to enjoy for such a man...well maybe not that enjoyable,,lol,,what about that sponge bath..sounds like a classic morning. Oh what a stiff they can be,,oi oi I asume I am no man to know,,Enjoyed daver,..p.d.
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Date: 7/28/2010 6:54:00 PM
Usually morning person refers to someone who loves the mornings. YOU, my friend, sound like me, a night owl, who only gets better and better as the day goes on. VERY nice! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/28/2010 4:10:00 PM
Heh heh, that last verse kinda kicked me in the butt! it's the end of the day now but You made me feel like starting it again, Daver! Feel like goin out there ...kickin butt and takin names but forgot how to write! Really enjoyed how you put this one together Daver...and hey..thanks for your great comment. I appreciate it as always my friend.
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Date: 7/28/2010 7:18:00 AM
This Narrative is quite the poetic write...I enjoyed it tremendously ! Awesome ! james
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Date: 7/27/2010 1:56:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Have you been taking Lunester? Sara
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Date: 7/26/2010 3:45:00 PM
What a journey ! Dave. I know th feeling all-to-well. Love, Lainie
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