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Good Old Days

I remember the smell of the polish The hissing of steam from the pots The songs on the radio playing And my nose dripping with snot Mum would grab me and wipe it With a dexterity practised before Leaving my nose like a beacon Me screeching as I went out the door My older sisters were singing As they , the house chores fulfilled The sun cut a beam through the window And there on the Lino it spilled Dust particles in its light they floated Not seen when its power was gone Yet they danced to the radio music As the sun through the window it shone These days are now but a memory But oh what a treasure they are Nothing I have can replace them Neither jewel nor silver nor car

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/14/2014 10:40:00 AM
Reminicing's not a crime. To cherish memories of a sweet time. It might be all that some have left. When loved one's leave a heart bereft. So yeah, I get it, looking back. But living there's a bit off track. :):):) Peace. :)
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/14/2014 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Robert once again. I guess my words were not in vain. Now Peter spread the news around. That there is a new poet in town. I am getting more reviews. that for me is very good news
Date: 2/13/2014 11:03:00 AM
hello, robert.. the language is personal and accessible, and the flow is casual yet charming.. remarkable piece of good ole days highlighted by radio music that binda a kin.. huggs
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/13/2014 12:07:00 PM
thank you for your kind words. So nice to get comments I have over 200 views on one poem and about 3 comments. Thank you once again. Regards Andy Lyle

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