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Good Night

The day slips into rayless sky And the busy of day finds it's end Before I rest these tuckered eyes There's a message I need to send You've made my day fortuitous In unexpected ways For merely just my thoughts of you Crafted smiles that lighted my face Could it be we're that in tune You mimic familiar routine To think of me as night resumes Saying good night dear one sweet dreams

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Mark Peterson

Date: 11/28/2013 8:24:00 PM

Such a precious note. I'd sit in tearful smile were I to receive it and then commit it to my box of memories to treasure always. If there were more people like you, this old world could cease its revolutions, the experiment complete.

Sarai Virden
Date: 11/29/2013 1:23:00 AM

Oh Mark, my friend... Consider yourself a recipient :-) So precious was your comment I sat there with my eyes watering yet stunned by your kindness all at the same time. You humble me.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 11/28/2013 12:39:00 PM

Sarai This is special!

Sarai Virden
Date: 11/28/2013 5:03:00 PM

I so appreciate you stopping by and your kind comment. Glad to make a new friend, looking forward to reading yours as well.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/28/2013 10:29:00 AM

deep touching beautiful piece

Sarai Virden
Date: 11/28/2013 5:00:00 PM

Many many thanks dear Liam... Not enough poems for The things we say every day. Hope your having a wonderful Thanksgiving.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/28/2013 8:21:00 AM

such a beautiful poem you have written, I think we all linger in the thoughts of a special someone....lovely write from your heart! :)

Sarai Virden
Date: 11/28/2013 4:56:00 PM

Thank you dear Sandra, I hope you are enjoying a wonderful Thanksgiving. I know I am thankful for you.

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/27/2013 11:35:00 AM

This is very deep & touching. Your heart shines strong. Excellent.

Sarai Virden
Date: 11/27/2013 11:54:00 AM

Once again your comments reach far and wide like hugs from a friend that know no miles, many many thanks Sir Drake

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/27/2013 10:52:00 AM

Awww I didn't realize how much you loved me sweet Sarai!!! LOL So nice of you to put it in the words of a poem so now everyone KNOWS! Funny old geezer eh!!! Love ya Sarai! xoxoxox

Sarai Virden
Date: 11/27/2013 11:29:00 AM

Good morning sweetie, the love just flows when it comes to you... Hope your beginning to be surrounded by all the pretty ladies, oh and family and friends too for Thanksgiving. Enjoy Jack, I'll be sharing your poems with my brood. Hugs galore xoxox