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Good bye mother

All through the years my heart was yearning for you to return to me, so that, we 
could be together again. Because you were untimely snatched away, my dreams  
and desires never became. Eventhough, I have known that you and I will never be 
reunited, my heart is still desperate for you. So through out the years, I have been 
seeking for a recarnation of you, a mother substitute. But you are unique dearest 
mother, no one can fill this desire that still remains in my heart. A heart that is 
longing to be mothered by someone just like you. However, I did not find you since 
you are lost forever because death has stolen you. So, good-bye mother, even 
though my heart is longing for you but I cease from seeking a mother substitute.

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  1. Date: 5/31/2011 9:25:00 AM
    I had a heart bleeding read Sophia.Heart touching and a wonderful write.Marvel Godwyn

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 1:06:00 PM
    a superbly written piece Sophia.. a wondrous tribute to a Mother taken too soon from u ... my Mom died two years ago on Thanksgiving Day and she was ALL to me so feeling your emotion as well luv..

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 10:38:00 AM
    My heart aches reading this.There is no substitute for our mothers.I lost mine as well.I really hope your heart heels in time.Fantastic images.Great job...sincerely,Kacey