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Good Bye

Good Bye Sun went down. Last beam touched her hair. She stood alone in the river side. Our eyes met. She blushed red. I was moved. Glaze of sun beam on her golden hair embellished my heart. Momentary look, she passed fast. I rushed to follow. A handsome guy blocked her path. Both turned back. She blushed red. They proceeded with hand in hand. My heart bade Good Bye. 01/11/16 Anacreontic Verse 2 Poetry contest Sponsor Edward Ebbs

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:27:00 PM
ANISHA, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/20/2016 5:12:00 AM
How lovely Anisha.. enjoyed reading today.. congrats on big win.
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Date: 1/19/2016 9:12:00 PM
Anisha,, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat *
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Date: 1/19/2016 5:43:00 PM
beautiful but sad Anisha congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/18/2016 11:04:00 PM
Congrats Anisha, thank you for entering :)
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:55:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 1/17/2016 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Funom. Happy New Year
Date: 1/11/2016 12:43:00 PM
Lovely write....wish it could have turned out in your favour
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 1/17/2016 11:29:00 PM
Thanks Smith. Happy New Year

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