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Good-By Michael

they gave you a face that lied the beautiful good-by to the innocence of children. lost to the massed screaming frenzy of that lying god of gold, you became a puppet of their money machines. never knowing yourself. lost in the frenzy of feeding sharks, ripping out pieces of your life to fill their bleeding mouths. you disappeared forever, a lonely little boy wanting only love. then they dragged you even out of the grave to make a few more bucks. good-by Michael i wish i could have held you. for just being a little boy and not a god. This is a draft Not a poem yet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/11/2009 9:11:00 AM
This is absolutely heart-wrenching. I love the last two lines. Best wishes, Sara:)
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:14:00 AM
what a poem! how doth the little boy become a gory god. well written and thought provoking. keep writing orphani!....o where in the world are you from. thanks for your great comment. I love this. great you! Adeleke
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:11:00 AM
It's true that they will continue to use his legend to make profit...and sadly...he never had to chance to just be a normal little boy...his stardom was a huge price to pay for his life. .... a compassionate write... Carrie
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Date: 9/11/2009 3:37:00 AM
interesting write,a lonely little boy wanting only love,excellent verse-who doesn't?nice write-Celina
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Date: 9/11/2009 3:32:00 AM
Interesting thoughts on this one. Keep writing. Sara
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