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Close the door and never think twice. Love is a gamble. Inwhich we all roll the dice. Many dreams are broken under a moonlit sky. Yet no word hold the pain like goodbye. I rememeber it so very well. Nights wrapped in passion. As silent promises as lovers we tell. Tressure thoose thoughts And buty them deep.. take my heart. For its forever yours to keep. Still night memeories show so very clear. They torture thoose thoughts. that tell me your no longer here. the brige now burnt stands as a memorial underneath a starlit sky. I find solace in the pain. as all i hear is goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/12/2009 8:15:00 AM
WOW i really like this poem, great emotion!!!
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Date: 5/4/2009 10:00:00 AM
goodbye---a hard woed when you know its forever,when you know you wont see the one you love anymore,its hard and we think of the past as it is still present as if it was still there,but we have to let go,or else we die,how greatly you express feelings and emotions we all can relate too--this goes to my favs---charma
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Date: 5/4/2009 9:36:00 AM
Wow, absolutly stunning John. This is a winner for sure. Amazing job i love this ^^ <3 Jese
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Date: 5/3/2009 8:40:00 PM
It hurts too much to say goodbye, such a horrid word at times when we lose our loves, I can identify with this well written piece and I know the pain.
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:41:00 PM
This is a beautiful write john.
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:25:00 PM
A very true definition of goodbye ... my friend, I wish there were reconciliation to cancel them ... life goes on.
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