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Gone Too Soon

Just like a dream You said good bye for good Painful tears flow like a stream A sorrowful mood Am sure you're not done You have a lot to offer But I can't believe you're gone And am here to suffer Had I know is this near I'd have prepare for this lackness That I had to bear Death so heartless To seize you life At the lazy hours of noon Leaving your kids and wife Alas! You left to soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/6/2016 9:44:00 PM
muhammed muazu, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/12/2012 6:09:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Muhammed. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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