Gone To the Dogs

Whither my rose of June ? What ! July hips so soon, ripe,stripped bare ..a finches menu lunch fare.

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Charlene Bird

Date: 7/9/2009 8:45:00 AM

Enjoy it while it lasts because it does fly bye! Great write as always Brian!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2009 8:42:00 AM

The cycle of life so to speak. Outstanding Brian. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/8/2009 8:04:00 AM

The summer goes by too quickly ..love the title and the poem works very well.

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/8/2009 7:40:00 AM

Good morning Brian - The truth of it all - seasons seem to come and go so swiftly - Wonderful Cinquain Brian - God Bless, MJ

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/8/2009 6:31:00 AM

Yes...the season swiftly changes...seems like things were beautifully in full bloom...but soon fade in summer heat...our roses will come back with a second bloom, usually do, when things cool down.