Gone the Goodtimes

Dancing in the rain under a tropical sky... the ice cap’s melting. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/26/2013 9:13:00 AM

ha, see now i understand senyru xx

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/21/2012 1:16:00 PM

Stunning imagery with a powerful message Harry, interesting title also ;) love Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2012 11:09:00 AM

Hi harry! I really like the image that you put in about dancing in the rain, it cuold very well be happening in my part of the world then contrast that you put here in your third line was really effective... sad but how true...I hope your doing well :) and thank you so much for passing by my poems :D --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2012 7:10:00 PM

This is nice but i like the other one better!(it's the one you chose for the contest, right?)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/18/2012 4:08:00 PM

Nicely done Harry!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/18/2012 3:22:00 PM

A concise and well put write from you Harry..

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 2/18/2012 2:40:00 PM

Enjoyed your excellent poetry today Harry , all the best mate , Declan ....

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/18/2012 12:14:00 PM

I would be dancing too if I was crazy enough to be out it the tropical rain! At least the rain would be warm! Yes, if there were ice caps under a tropical sky they would most certainly me melting :) Awesome poem here my friend! Great Work!!

Russell Sivey
Date: 2/18/2012 12:17:00 PM

I do understand the real, in depth meaning of the poem...I was kidding around with the above comment of ice caps melting in the tropical sky and so on...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2012 9:07:00 AM

we just had a downpour this am in Italy and Ron and I decided to get wet ..so fun.. temps in 70 today.. luv the sweet connotations im this piece Harry luv..