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Gone For Good?

my heart twitched as if i knew he was the one or was it the fact that he'd packed and run our love was inspiring and absolutely amazing so why did he cut himself out was he just fazing i don't understand i don't think i will i just wish he could be the one to hold me still life is full of confusing ups and downs and certain levels and crazy rounds so maybe we just had failed so i wrote a letter and got it mailed and then i had the urge so i just smiled but then he got the papers and had them filed how could he,i wondered for hours but then he sent me some flowers he told me the papers were ripped and gone i looked to his side and his bags were on the front lawn i love you his mouth spilled out and that's true no doubt

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Date: 5/13/2016 11:55:00 PM
caroline, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 9:38:00 AM
Caroline, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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