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Gone Away

I lived spring with my destiny We walked together in the road of, Small peach blossoms tickled by morning breeze Jasmine flowers were floating along crystal waters Shy birds were tweeting in the branches We slept under the sky guarded by twinkle stars I woke up a day and i found him away, He took with him my dreams and my hope away Winter laid its shadows of cold in my heart, Before spreading its flakes on earth Sadness grew with seconds… Tears shed with years…

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Date: 12/23/2023 3:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/1/2020 12:04:00 AM
You have an incredible mind, Yue. Such beautiful work.. kepp writing & sharing :)
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Date: 5/4/2016 11:59:00 AM
Nadi, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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Date: 2/5/2016 12:22:00 AM
awesome poem. LINDA
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Date: 11/7/2015 9:36:00 AM
I like it
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:07:00 AM
Nadia, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:32:00 PM
SKAT.A thx lot i appreciate it lot^^!
Date: 6/1/2015 8:43:00 AM
Thanks for visiting me. I enjoyed rereading this one.
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Date: 2/13/2015 12:57:00 PM
- A touching and lovely poem Nadia !! - I wish you a romantic Valentine day and a beautiful weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:20:00 PM
'm really honored that u liked my humble words,thank you!
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:16:00 PM
This is really really good, I am surprised I am the first to leave a comment. Well done!
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