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Gone

Falling Deeper...deeper..deeper Into the darkness Swallowing you whole Envoloping you in black You welcome it A comforting oblivion No pain No hurt No sadness No feeling Blissful numbing The blood drips out More...more...more As you slip farther away... Each drop another part of life you lose Slowly fading away. Faster...faster..faster Your final moments tick by. You close your eyes Peaceful Pleasant Oblivious You don't feel a thing You've wasted away Gone now... But finally in bliss

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Date: 3/12/2013 12:33:00 PM
the format of this makes for a very interesting read
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Brittany Larson
Date: 3/12/2013 9:50:00 PM
Thank you :)

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