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Gone

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Gone


Falling

Deeper...deeper..deeper

Into the darkness

Swallowing you whole

Envoloping you in black

You welcome it

A comforting oblivion

No pain

No hurt

No sadness

No feeling

Blissful numbing

The blood drips out

More...more...more

As you slip farther away...

Each drop another part of life you lose

Slowly fading away.

Faster...faster..faster

Your final moments tick by.

You close your eyes

Peaceful

Pleasant

Oblivious

You don't feel a thing

You've wasted away

Gone now...

But finally in bliss

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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 12:33:00 PM
    the format of this makes for a very interesting read

    Larson Avatar Brittany Larson
    Date: 3/12/2013 9:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)