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I do not believe there is life after death Taking into consideration my late brothers death From home, he was not very far When his life was taken, poof, by a car So if he sits upon a cloud Then I say this, I say it loud As much as he knew his mother's love Then he would contact, from up above For just one sign for his mother's relief He would have sent, that is my belief The death of her son was the death of her soul She very quickly spiralled into a dark hole Very soon she passed away Perhaps in some kind of way She left the whole to be with one Some one she loved, someone, her son There has never been evidence of contact from the late They are gone forever and that is their fate One tiny word to say you were fine But saying and doing is a very fine line. JS5533 Spiritual

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Date: 3/1/2014 11:20:00 PM
A very emotional piece. Grats on your win. Christopher Thor Britt
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Date: 3/1/2014 1:47:00 AM
I extremely enjoyed reading this. So like it. Thank u so much for sharing and my big warm congratulations on your well-deserved win my dear friend. love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/28/2014 10:21:00 PM
and I really liked your poem. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 2/28/2014 10:20:00 PM
I can understand someone feeling this way. Except for the way I was raised, maybe I would feel this way too. But even if I'd not been raised with my belief system, I think I would have believed in some kind of afterlife for the simple fact that the earth is too well ordered.Nature is just too wonderful to have been created solely by the mistake of a big bang. There is something out there, I just know it. Maybe not what I was raised to believe. I have faith we will both find it when we pass on.
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Date: 2/28/2014 12:11:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, John. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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John Scott
Date: 2/28/2014 1:40:00 PM
Thank you but unexpected
Date: 2/28/2014 11:34:00 AM
a nice impressive poem, John. have a nice one....................SKAT
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John Scott
Date: 2/28/2014 1:41:00 PM
thank you, I do not do the deep stuff, I kinda see the world
Date: 2/28/2014 8:38:00 AM
Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, john
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John Scott
Date: 2/28/2014 9:55:00 AM
Thank You, it is based on a true story
Date: 2/28/2014 8:26:00 AM
Congrats John on the win . A brilliant one indeed.
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John Scott
Date: 2/28/2014 9:55:00 AM
Thank You, it is based on a true story, the boy ran off

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