Gone

Here again but gone Ive left to find out where i was wrong. I cant see whats in front of me or feel what i want to feel even if i start to bleed. Ive left but im still here. I have fear. Fear of not knowing what ill do next. But i think ill start by doing whats best...For me.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/12/2010 6:20:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ariel. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2010 6:49:00 PM

that's right, you come first, enjoyed the write

Jared Pickett

Date: 5/11/2010 6:45:00 PM

That is the best way... Good write my friend.,...:JP}