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Golfers Beware

If a golfer who’s clumsy and falls Loses grip on the clubs that he hauls He might trip on a trap With some wood in his lap And have problems in finding his balls! * this is my original poem, which doesn't conform to the contest syllable count. i like it better, though!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/28/2013 11:25:00 PM
for me they both sounded great. I don't know the reasons for the syllable restrictions since a good limerick's first lines can be anywhere from 8 to 10 syllables. I've even seen some with 11 in the first lines.
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Date: 3/27/2013 1:03:00 PM
You can't go wrong singing a song about a man trying to find his ....s. :) Thanks for the laugh. :)
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Date: 3/26/2013 9:44:00 PM
So made me laugh Ilene.....thanks - Donna
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