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Golden Yellow Trees

The blue sky peeks at me quite far away Through the warm golden yellow autumn trees They look like gold placed against the blue day This lively scene looks beautiful today The path goes straight forward where you see The blue sky peeks at me quite far away The sight is amazing, I truly say I walk the path of trees so I can be They look like gold placed against the blue day The row of trees glow with yellow this day The whole land here grows as if it’s so free The blue sky peeks at me quite far away I go down whistling and thought this way The sky with the trees sure does impress me They look like gold placed against the blue day I know the sight will stay with me I say Golden color of the trees delight me The blue sky peeks at me quite far away They look like gold placed against the blue day
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/20/2013 11:41:00 AM
Villanelles are one of my favorite forms and your composition is quite admirable. The detailed descriptions allows one to truly experience the piece. Excellent piece.
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Date: 3/19/2013 8:43:00 PM
Russell; this must be nice to to be able to feel all that. Spring starts here tomorrow. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/19/2013 12:39:00 PM
Very beautiful gold and blue day Russell...enjoyed travelling this poem.
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Date: 3/19/2013 8:13:00 AM
Reads like an autumn time or the early sun shining through the trees..Enjoyed reading this morn..Got to go prepare lunch..Thanks for the visit..I have finished "The Old Wooden Bench"..Sara
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