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Golden yellow, I amazed

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Golden yellow, I amazed

                       This morning through my window I gazed
                       A golden shower bride I amazed
                       Heard a beautiful flute music I glee
                       Searched each twig of the golden shower tree
                       A golden yellow bird singing its merry song I spied
                       Hiding on one twig calling its bride
                       Of my golden shower bride swaying in the breeze pale 
                       A broach on her yellow flowery veil

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:00:00 PM
    What a beautiful picture you paint... the images to you ARE gold. Gold in the sense of beauty and appreciation for nature... love it!

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 7:59:00 AM

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 5/18/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 6:33:00 AM
    My dearest, when I read your poetry you transport me into time, to a place that is untouched by humans, a place where nature is the sanctuary of the soul, you are a true poet Manel, and your soul is into this glimpsed verse, but alas much to large to be contained, keep writing your light on my page, they are like a taste of saffron on my heart, have a beautiful day, love to you always Rose xxx

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 4:14:00 AM
    It is so amazingly beautiful and cheering that I feel like singing myself!

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake
    Date: 5/18/2013 5:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you my dearest friend