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Golden Treasure Chest

A soft stream bubbling down the courageous way Forming ice particles along its cold sides My reflection that is visible by day Withers by the flow which freezes there besides The trees on the banks secures the waterway Easy for the soil to measure thoughts today This picture in graciously placed at its best Where I have buried my golden treasure chest Russell Sivey Contest: Treasure Chest...What's in yours? Have you found it yet?..etc... Sponsor: Anthony Slausen 7/19/2013

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John Posey

Date: 7/25/2013 5:07:00 PM

Masterfully done, my friend. True to form and easy to read... Should place high on the winners list.... Jake

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/23/2013 1:59:00 PM

"Easy for the soil to measure thoughts today"............what a wonderful line that is!! This is a gem......it should do well, Russell !!

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/21/2013 1:22:00 AM

Ah, such a deeply painted atmosphere created. Nicely done!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/20/2013 4:50:00 PM

different approach to the theme, russell... you weave memorable images depicting a special moment in time... what a gem in finest form.. superb!..:) hugggs

Jack Horne

Date: 7/20/2013 10:22:00 AM

beautiful write for the contest, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2013 8:24:00 AM

Ahhh!! Very poeticly written..Enjoyed reading this morning..If for a contest, reads likea winner to me..Sara...Thanks for the visits by the rattlesnake..

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/20/2013 3:28:00 AM

Nice one Russell, good luck...Seren