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Across the sky, like arrowheads, from silhouettes against the red, the call of wild geese swiftly fades into the sun. And then sun bades a sad farewell to one last strand of summer's thread
~~ ~~ For Nette's Contest: "Reflections of a Florette" By Carrie Richards 9/4/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/14/2014 11:31:00 PM
What a beautiful vivid picture you have painted here Carrie. Lainie
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Date: 9/14/2014 10:17:00 PM
fascinating shift from the presence of a season to its farewell, carrie.. thank you for joining my contest with big congrats and huggs
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Date: 9/14/2014 8:07:00 AM
Carrie, this is a wonderfully picturesque poem. It is an awesome sight, watching the geese, in formation, slowly disappear along with the sun.
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Date: 9/14/2014 3:14:00 AM
Hi Carrie! Love your take on this theme; you never fail to deliver! Beautiful! Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:11:00 AM
Brilliantly unique Carrie! U hv a golden pen! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/13/2014 10:31:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win, Carrie
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Date: 9/13/2014 6:34:00 PM
totally unique take on the theme - simply stunning! many congrats hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/13/2014 6:26:00 PM
Beautiful poem Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
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