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Golden Sprinkles From the Silent Sky

It's the middle of August, and every emotion seems lost... chasing golden sprinkles from the silent sky that twinkles. This remote spot is a secretive place of two enamored hearts who love to swoon... as their whispers rise to the descending moon, and yes our ecstatic joy changes her moody face. Shooting stars continue to fall from the peaceful sky, to adorn our night with golden sprinkles; not even a fairy could do such wonders with a wand that grants a wish sweeter than a lullaby. Laying on the gleaming grass as many lovers have, we stare at something that fantasy cannot fulfill in an hour or less; and fascinated by their brilliance, we wonder if this is reality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/22/2012 6:10:00 PM
So nice to see you doing a bit of rhyming and ..look at that cool enjambment! Congrad's on this winning write. Light & love
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:30:00 PM
Such expressive winning work.Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/21/2012 11:33:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Andrew xx
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Date: 8/21/2012 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2012 4:14:00 AM
congrats Andrew, enjoyed this wonderful poem.
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:31:00 AM
Andrew big congrats on your win...David
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Date: 8/21/2012 2:27:00 AM
congrats on your win, andrew... how lyrical!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/21/2012 12:36:00 AM
Wonderful piece,Andrew...Congratulations on your well deserved win...Great job..
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Date: 8/20/2012 1:57:00 PM
Beautiful write, Congrats on your 4th place win in my contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 8/17/2012 5:29:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Andrew. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2012 1:19:00 PM
Lovely indeed! wonderful imagery. :) Tanya
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Date: 8/16/2012 11:13:00 AM
What a lovely scene this sets, well done xx
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Date: 8/16/2012 10:50:00 AM
Andrew I love the vision...David
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Date: 8/16/2012 10:48:00 AM
andrew, your words indeed have a soothing power laced within them... what a glowing rhyme.. winning huggs!..:)
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