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Golden shower

Compressed air rose
In autumn air most lovely
Her mouth wide open

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  1. Date: 10/7/2009 10:53:00 PM
    This is gorgeous! (And I'm not just saying that because my name is in the title!) ;o) Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 10/4/2009 12:30:00 PM
    Interesting perspective in this poem. I really like the title. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/3/2009 1:06:00 AM
    Beautiful image here, Geoffrey. Air rose - her mouth... Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 10/2/2009 9:08:00 PM
    Wow! What a picture you paint in this Haiku, Geoffrey. Thank you for sharing and thank you for you nice comment on My shape poem. Lainie