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Golden Shower

Compressed air rose In autumn air most lovely Her mouth wide open

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/7/2009 10:53:00 PM
This is gorgeous! (And I'm not just saying that because my name is in the title!) ;o) Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/4/2009 12:30:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. I really like the title. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 10/3/2009 1:06:00 AM
Beautiful image here, Geoffrey. Air rose - her mouth... Love, Iolanda
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Date: 10/2/2009 9:08:00 PM
Wow! What a picture you paint in this Haiku, Geoffrey. Thank you for sharing and thank you for you nice comment on My shape poem. Lainie
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