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In the realm where dreams collide, is she the smirk star that appears, glides, then walks? I grasped you; the otherworldly was in the vicinity, gazing in awe at the scene of beauty. As far as I notice where I sit on this earth, I like your lambent soul, guiding me toward the glow that beams and leads me into a lucid night. Oh, buoyant star, you shine and dazzle of  dedication that is bright and cloudless It hurts my eyes and takes away my inner climes. To myself, I said, "You are truly a dulcet icon. And upthrust above the wilderness, looking starry At night, you shine brighter than the skies my consolations utterly ignite your soul. And the world where dreams resist colliding, all bind and confine, to divulge facts, that's, even the stars tremble in your presence, best  when twilight falls, for hope to return, of   tactility to grab your light in the dark. I'm holding on to my emptiness, sorrow, and I am in awe of the beauty of this star so bright. Inspired by: Lord Byron – She Walks in Beauty She walks in beauty, like the night Of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all that’s best of dark and bright

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Date: 10/7/2023 11:00:00 AM
Congrats on your winning entry Sotto.
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Date: 10/7/2023 11:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Craig, appreciate your placement and comment on my poem.
Date: 8/31/2023 4:35:00 AM
Such a difficult task is this ! I wont even try it. You are a miracle worker dear friend to make an absolutely plausible poem from a smattering of unmatched words. Truly commendable.
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Date: 8/30/2023 11:08:00 PM
What a beautiful and moving write this is. I felt so much as i read these lines. The way they flow with such ethereal imagery. The smoothness of your descriptive lines is so very soul warming, i truly loved reading this one. This might be one of my faves again from you and you’ve made this form sound so easy to do. Love this
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Date: 8/30/2023 1:13:00 PM
This poem is so beautiful , soft and calming to read. I enjoyed this excellent poem. Well written! :)
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Date: 8/30/2023 11:01:00 AM
WOW!!! What a write/picture. "Love This One" Good Luck. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 8/30/2023 10:24:00 AM
So gorgeous, Sotto...you made the appearance of the gliding star so enthralling and beautiful!
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