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Golden Rods of Light

Long slender fingers golden rods of light Reach for flowering foliage thirsting in His sight Nature provides the nurture A constant supply of balance upon dawns newly designed future Her fingers playfully hop across crested aqua waves Toward apricot sands that reside along our shores unscathed Trumpet vines cling to a stony ledge Gracing the walls of a sandy path that leads to the water's edge Carole Cookie Arnold

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Date: 7/22/2010 2:06:00 PM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on being featured this week. Caryl
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Date: 7/22/2010 7:32:00 AM
very pretty poem, congrats on it being featured this week
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Date: 7/19/2010 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carole. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:21:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan
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Date: 6/3/2010 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Carole. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 5:55:00 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are such a great writer… love Leke
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/6/2010 10:26:00 AM
Great descriptive write that show how in touch with nature the writer seems to be...Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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Date: 5/4/2010 3:25:00 AM
lovely poem cookie.. best wishes to u
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:27:00 PM
Congrats Cookie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to feature and share with us all... with luv..from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:29:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Carole. Love,Carol
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Date: 1/18/2010 1:24:00 PM
What a lovely piece, weaving these colors into the magic of your poem here. Thanks for your comments, and oh, I am now seeing that you "center" all your poetry (instead of posting them from the left margin), that is what makes them look so nice! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:34:00 PM
Lovely word pictures here, Carole. You're a master with rhymes, I enjoy reading your poems.
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Date: 1/9/2010 11:20:00 PM
Cookie, What a work of art! Your imagery stands out in a visual feast of colors. Just beautiful! Thank you for your nice comments on my work. Wish I had more time to spend here. Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 1/8/2010 5:09:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Carole. May your writing take you to new heights each and everyday. I hope you will continue to share your writing with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/7/2010 9:00:00 PM
What nicely organized and descriptive writing. So happy I found this! andrea
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