Golden Rays

A snow covered lake Shining brightly like diamond The sun's golden rays.

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Date: 1/21/2012 6:47:00 AM

This one is a very spectacular haiku, Span...just glimmering and making me put on my sunglasses just to observe the scenery..wonderful Gwendolen

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 1/25/2012 2:00:00 AM

Thanks Gwendolen for your kind comments in my poem...

Date: 1/19/2012 7:54:00 AM

oh span.. i know you are busy but can i have a new scoop of your piece... miss your poetry..:) huggs!

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 1/20/2012 1:08:00 AM

Well Net I will come back soon and thanks for your kind coments in my poem

Date: 1/11/2012 1:50:00 AM

saon! from snow to sun--how brilliant.. i am a fan of yours!!.. :) huggs!

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 1/17/2012 5:52:00 AM

Thanks Net for commenting in my poem....spandan

Nette Onclaud
Date: 1/11/2012 1:50:00 AM

*span,"

Date: 1/9/2012 10:47:00 PM

thanks for your comment today. Keep up your writing, Spandan. I'll be saying to you like I say to your dad: MORE poems please.

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 1/17/2012 5:53:00 AM

Thanks Andrea for commenting in my poem...spandan.

Date: 12/30/2011 1:39:00 PM

Nicely done, Spandan, keep them coming.

Date: 12/30/2011 11:51:00 AM

Nice haiku !! I can picture it. Enjoyed !!

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 1/17/2012 5:56:00 AM

Thanks Debra for commenting in my poem also enjoyed your poem.....spandan