Golden Moon

Bubbling desires on Wings of love abide 'neath a Golden moon's soft light Passions erupt, spewing lust Into ponds of ecstasy ~

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Skat A

Date: 12/22/2015 3:28:00 PM

Joseph, Congrats on your win. WUV **SKAT**

Joseph May
Date: 12/22/2015 6:54:00 PM

Thank you Skat...hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2013 10:47:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations.....LINDA

Fatima Nusairat

Date: 11/9/2013 5:36:00 PM

Congratulation Joseph May

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/9/2013 4:19:00 AM

Congrats on the win , Joseph

Skat A

Date: 11/8/2013 8:55:00 PM

lovely Joseph, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2012 3:46:00 PM

wonderful and lusty!! Congrats, Joseph.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 5:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2012 3:51:00 AM

CONGRATS JOSEPH ON A BEAUTIFUL WRITE OF GOLDEN MOON AND A WELL DESERVED WIN LUV ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 7:11:00 PM

JOSEPH, congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD

Len Gasun

Date: 10/23/2012 3:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome win, Joseph May! hugs:)LG

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2012 2:14:00 PM

J, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2012 8:49:00 PM

wow, now here is one I had not seen before!! it's quite nice. Soupmail for ya.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/29/2012 7:20:00 PM

All this could only happen when a moon is up and shining her magic. These things are just not appropriate in the daytime. Lots of great emotion Joe!

Joseph May
Date: 5/29/2012 8:20:00 PM

thank you Liz..

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 5/28/2012 5:28:00 PM

ooh I really like this! I bet Rick will too! One of the best I've seen! good luck :)

Joseph May
Date: 5/29/2012 8:20:00 PM

thank you Susan

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/26/2012 9:15:00 AM

*whew* hot Joseph! :) all that 'erupting' 'spewing' some major 'passions' was going on under that moon for sure!! ;) well done my friend....big hug, love ya and best wishes in the contest :)

Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2012 2:27:00 PM

thank you Deb..good luck with your entry also

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/23/2012 3:10:00 PM

I like how u wrote yours with warm emotion and a passionate urging! ...I actually had 2 parts to mine but was limited with the contest rules...Looking forward to seeing how this stands up against Rick and his strict judging...I seldom ever win a place in Rick or Brian's contests,...EVER! ...I am not sophisticated enough in my vocab and usage of metaphors...You on the other hand, you got this thing down pat!! I likey what I see-y...hahaha. :) Gwendolen

Joseph May
Date: 5/26/2012 2:28:00 PM

thank you Gwen...yours is passionate too

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2012 7:43:00 AM

Joseph, ----- beautiful !!! - oxox Anne-Lise

Joseph May
Date: 5/23/2012 1:48:00 PM

thank you Anne, I appreciate your comments