Golden Hues

Autumn brings cooler days Effusing fiery golden hues

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2012 6:25:00 AM

I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Joseph. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/25/2012 10:47:00 AM

Lovely!!! I love the mix of the words 'cooler' and 'fiery', the blend has certainly produced lovely imagery. Nice!

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/17/2012 6:47:00 PM

beautiful...autumn and it's beauty shine through...love the season and really enjoyed this poem... i have yet to try this form! nicely done by you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2012 4:34:00 PM

oh, here is a sweet one I missed. well, you are pretty much my last comment for the day. I feel good. I saw many poems and got caught up!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/14/2012 8:14:00 PM

Hello Joseph, i love this,,,but are you really gonna leave me hanging with your ABC form , not ending at or on Z... oh, i'm just saying, you have such a beautiful line.. I really love this gassy hue hitting these past days... always...pd

Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2012 4:53:00 AM

thank you PD....its a two liner only