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I found on this site that the ABC form can be done in two different ways..I chose the second way of doing it..Every time a see a field like this I think that the field is ripe for harvest..

. Amazingly alive and appealing Bearded Crop ready Delightful bread bowl Wheat golden ripe ready for harvest.. Contest:Nature's Bounty Sponsor:John Freeman The second choice of ABC form from this site's definition... Click on: "About This Poem"

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John Freeman

Date: 11/7/2011 5:53:00 PM

Thanks Sara for your "Golden Grain" in support of my contest, Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/7/2011 12:38:00 PM

oh, i was rooting for this, sara.. congrats! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/7/2011 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Moses' sponsored contest "Natures Bounty" Sara. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2011 10:40:00 PM

Congrats Sara on an outstanding win with this profound ABC for the contest luv.. amazing piece..

Jack Horne

Date: 11/6/2011 7:09:00 AM

Beautiful piece, my friend. Very descriptive indeed

John Smith

Date: 11/5/2011 10:28:00 PM

You nicely echo Shakespeare's Sonnet #12.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/5/2011 8:14:00 PM

reminds me of my roots in the Midwest! Super Good Sara!

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/5/2011 1:52:00 PM

And this is full of the bounty and beauty that is provided for us Sara...good wishes for success..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/4/2011 9:34:00 PM

sara, this is REALLY nice, but John wants it done in paragraph form. I agree with you, though. This form is much funner to do and to read! (love the "bearded crop" imagery)

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/4/2011 3:24:00 PM

* Ps. * “Your Welcome Sweet Beautiful Sara * Thank You Also * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/4/2011 11:51:00 AM

* “I Find Your Lovely Words Sooo Sensual * Seductive * Stimulating * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Sara * All About A Simple Harvest of Grain * I Know, It Must Be That Time of The Year * Hahaha * Very Lovely * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Kash Poet

Date: 11/4/2011 11:22:00 AM

beautifully written .Enjoyed.I think I can have a try with this alternate form...thanks for the note .Best wishes.

Judy Ball

Date: 11/4/2011 10:28:00 AM

Nothing quite so lovely as a golden wheat field. Nice job myfriend. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/4/2011 9:55:00 AM

glorious words of ABC Sara..good luck in the contest.. enjoyed your creative concept luv..

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 11/4/2011 8:52:00 AM

Hmmm! Sounds tempting...

Tony Lane

Date: 11/4/2011 4:48:00 AM

Nice write Sara. Tony

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/3/2011 10:13:00 PM

It just flows so very well! Your graphics you created within your descriptions allowed me to picture the poem in my head! Wonderful, wonderful piece of art!! Good luck in the contest, you will do well I know!! Incredible work!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/3/2011 9:25:00 PM

Wonderful wining write where Nature's bounty of Golden grain is highlighted. Best of Luck for Contest. Thanks for sharing and giving thanks on my poem. bl

John Smith

Date: 11/3/2011 7:08:00 PM

Delightful write. Makes good beer, too.

Tim B

Date: 11/3/2011 3:04:00 PM

Love it, you literally make the grain feel alive as you suggest it is in the first line. I also love the adjective bearded for this purpose. Delightful poem Mrs. Sara!