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golden feelings

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golden feelings

The foundations 
built in stone 
Coming together 
our kingdom 
Heaven the rock 
we build upon 
Building a temple 
to love 

On which you 
stand a starlight 
Standing beside me 
Beautiful emotion 
You are 
the foundations 

The union 
of two souls 
Spirit of heaven 
you lure me 
My soul offers 
you the foundation 
On which 
I built my heart 
In how 
I see you 

With the labours 
of love 
Carved deep
 into this stone 
My dowry 
to you 

The center 
of my earth 
You opened 
heaven's gate 

Warm a golden feeling 
Flooding tears 
of happiness 
At last 
I found you 
Priceless this feeling 
Worshiping you 
an angel 
You gave 
me love 

The strength
 to carry on 
In battle love 
against hate 
Love prevails 
my guardian 
The light 
in your shining armor 
The sword 
of truth 

Shining bright 
with love 
You leave 
your footprints 
all over 
my heart

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  1. Date: 9/9/2013 5:25:00 AM
    You left your fingerprints all over my soul.in these verses...Amazing!Re visiting North Ireland..I will in the coming years..: )

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/9/2013 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    as i would love to see you beautiful within the soul it would be a delight to see you in the flesh thank you sweetly heartfelt appreciated
  1. Date: 9/9/2013 3:38:00 AM
    You really succeeded in carrying me into some warm feelings. Very well expressed words. I like your style. Always, Laura

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/9/2013 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for the warm amazing comment deeply appreciated