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The end of summer has turned dull. O’er rugged land on Isle of Mull a golden eagle flies up high where the wind howls and clouds float by, then it glides down graceful and free towards a tall imposing tree. There it alights. It comes to rest upon the branches where its nest is placed in order to outwit unwelcome foes. The fledglings sit excited, for it is now time to flap their wings and upwards climb. Calling each other as they soar, swooping and circling by the shore as mother eagle looks from high she keeps on them a watchful eye. -------------------------------------------- 21st October, 2015 Contest: Golden Eagle Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Placed 2nd

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/7/2018 10:50:00 PM

Oh, if only one could have wings and soar the wild horizon with the smooth glide of an eagle, dear Paul.. what a glorious depiction of elegance, grace, intensity and beauty. A gorgeous poem my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 8/9/2018 5:32:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely and complimentary comments, dear Susan. If I remember correctly, this poem had to make use of several prompt words. So glad you enjoyed it my friend. Warm regards & hugs // paul

John Michaels

Date: 5/9/2017 4:01:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Paul. No wonder you got such a high placing!! Well done! Regards, John.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/10/2017 11:37:00 AM

Thank you, John. I was quite pleased with the end result, considering that I had to make use of a set of words given by the sponsor. Regards // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/26/2015 7:09:00 AM

congrats for the win Paul!! weeee, pizza on the way! ~olive Eloisa =`)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/26/2015 5:50:00 PM

THANK YOU oLIVE_ELOI!! Pizza is always welcome, as long as it's thin and crusty! Oh...there's a knock on the door...must be the delivery man:) Hugs // paul

Laura Hay

Date: 10/24/2015 4:22:00 AM

A 7 :)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2015 5:06:00 PM

txs :)

Laura Hay

Date: 10/24/2015 4:21:00 AM

Wonderfully done Paul, a very special pen you have indeed, well done on your win too :) , warm rgds, Laura

Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2015 5:05:00 PM

Many thanks, Laura! Your generous comments are truly appreciated. Enjoy your weekend:) Warm regards // paul

Michael Tor

Date: 10/23/2015 10:15:00 PM

Paul congratulations on your win my friend. A well deserved one at that. Congratulations!!!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2015 5:53:00 PM

Thank you my friend...a most welcome visitor to my pages:) ~ Regards // paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/23/2015 5:07:00 PM

Ain't life grand? I am so happy for your win, Paul ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2015 5:33:00 PM

Thank you very much, CayCay! Your encouragement and support are appreciated. Yes, life can be beautiful...notwithstanding the clouds that at times darken the sky! I offer you a smile for a lovely weekend:) ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2015 2:37:00 PM

Congrats on your eagle landing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those eagles a vision of beauty..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 4:04:00 PM

Eagles dare us to look and admire!! Thank you Sara. have a nice weekend. // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/23/2015 8:59:00 AM

Nicely done, Paul. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 4:03:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra. Enjoyed your winning entry, too:) ~ Regards // paul

Lin Lane

Date: 10/23/2015 8:49:00 AM

To be an eagle...Congratulations, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 3:42:00 PM

...And to have wings!! Thank you Lin. Let us dream together:) ~ Regards // paul

Sneha Rv

Date: 10/23/2015 7:25:00 AM

This is so marvellous!! Congratulations on your lovely win!! :D :D

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 3:41:00 PM

Thank you, Sneha:) Glad you enjoyed. ~ Sweet regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2015 5:25:00 AM

so beautifully penned Paul congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 3:12:00 PM

Many thanks, Jan; still have to see the winning poems. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2015 2:39:00 PM

- I admire this amazing poem ..... a winning poem, true my words Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 3:07:00 PM

Thank you for reading and liking, Anne Lise:) Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/22/2015 11:10:00 AM

magical bird, also poet and poem,

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 3:10:00 PM

You killed 3 birds with one stone, Harry:))) Thank you! ~ Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/22/2015 8:29:00 AM

Your poem soars as high as your majestic subject!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 3:09:00 PM

Thank you for your judgment, Richard! It did indeed soar to the winners' list:) ~ Regards // paul

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/22/2015 4:18:00 AM

Always excellent poetry from you, Paul. This one is as majestic as mother eagle herself. Always, Laura

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 2:50:00 PM

Thank you, Laura; your generous comments are much appreciated. ~ Take care and enjoy your weekend. Regards // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/22/2015 12:08:00 AM

This poem is really beautiful, Paul. The rhyming, combined with flowing lines and wonderful images, makes it so enjoyable... Good luck in Shadow's contest!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 2:47:00 PM

And your comments are a joy to read, Kelly:) Thank you ~ Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/21/2015 9:28:00 PM

There are some impressive and 'awe' inspiring lines in your beautiful poem. The way it read was magical to me ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 1:54:00 PM

Your lovely feedback leaves me in awe, CayCay! Thank you! Glad you enjoyed. ~ Regards // paul

Edward Ebbs

Date: 10/21/2015 9:16:00 PM

Very nice Paul, I like this...good luck my friend :)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 1:31:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Edward. Thank you for stopping by. // paul