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Golden Array

GOLDEN ARRAY. Bucolic pastorale in hold to gaze, It is a lovely view,flicker of hope, Vivid shades of gold colour in a maze, Worth a review,its streak rays downward slope. Luminous freshness,carnival of light, Leave the soft pillows,morning song birds choir, New date has started,chirp chirp, all is bright, Superfluous blaze,someone to click I would hire. Celestial body,the tangerine sky, Immortal ball in the horizon glides, I'm awake,I hear my baby call and cry, Daily routine starts with too busy rides. World you empower and change calender, Eternal,sincere is your endeavour. Choice#3Virginia Woolf's novel "The Waves". Form Sonnet-abab, cdcd, efef, gg. 10 syllables per line. Contest:Three choices plus two. Sponsor:Sara Kendrick. 30/11/2016.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/22/2016 10:21:00 AM

Your choice from the five choices is an excellent one in my book..I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..Congrats on your placement..Sara

Darren White

Date: 12/19/2016 2:01:00 AM

"Celestial body,the tangerine sky,..//.. Immortal ball in the horizon glides,..//.. I'm awake,I hear my baby call and cry,..//.. Daily routine starts with too busy rides."..//.. I love that stanza, it is wonderful. Well deserved win. Congratulations.