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Gold Sand

Gold sand Milk waves washes Foot prints of yesterday Restore with clear smooth surface for New feet

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/20/2013 7:47:00 PM

Thanks for the visits and for making me smile!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/19/2013 2:10:00 AM

Hi Manel, beautiful poem you have going here. You’ve captured the past and the future seeks to show the continuity of life and the preciousness of time. Very nice. I’m certainly looking forward to read more of your work. Vicky.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2013 2:41:00 PM

- Beautifully, Manel !!!! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/18/2013 11:10:00 AM

This is fantastic! Straight to my favorites. 7 all the way.