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Gold On the Horizon

The sun has lifted the weight of my day, and sweeps gloom away, burnishing each cloud with bright golden rays A dreary day, and weary me, finds glory in divine display Gold unfolds, over the horizon... where I see the light ____________________________________________________ Inspired By Dr. Ram's Contest: "Hope" Diminished Hexaverse 1/8/15

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/23/2015 10:15:00 PM

Beautiful imagery with your inspiring words, Carrie...congrats to you on your BIG win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/21/2015 11:34:00 PM

So sweet Carrie,congrats on the win...huggs

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/21/2015 12:34:00 AM

Congrats on your top spot ....Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2015 2:28:00 PM

((())) Way to go. Congrats. SK

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/20/2015 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on win. Love

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/20/2015 4:06:00 AM

Congrats to your awesome win Carrie! ^_^

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/20/2015 3:40:00 AM

congratulations Carrie.. :) Sunshines always make my day and indeed for me my symbolism of God's hope.. new day eh.. :)! ---olive eloisa

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/19/2015 9:33:00 PM

Superb write Carrie! Congrats on top place win!

David Fisher

Date: 1/19/2015 7:19:00 PM

Way to go on this contest. You captured hope's essence.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/19/2015 5:30:00 PM

Sunsets, Sunrises, Gold on the Horizon. I especially like the balanced alliteration in "dreary day" and "divine display" Congratulations, Carrie.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 1/19/2015 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your high marks Carrie. Well done! Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2015 12:19:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/19/2015 10:59:00 AM

Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating. I look forward for your contribution for the new contest Dizain

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/19/2015 10:12:00 AM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 1/19/2015 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved top win Carrie. A very enjoyable read.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/19/2015 8:17:00 AM

Carrie, congratulations on your top win for your powerful poem of hope. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/17/2015 9:47:00 AM

Excellent, Carrie! What a lovely picture you paint...and how positive it all sounds! a very worthy entry! Hope you're having a lovely weekend. // paul

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 1/10/2015 6:12:00 PM

Splendid... Beautifully written Carrie... GL in the contest... Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/8/2015 9:52:00 PM

Wonderful write Carrie,, a true paint,,love the title !great work! gl in contest!