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Gold Dredging Early morning first light Camped on the rugged, mountainous terrain Out of our warm sleeping bags and tent we crawl To the smells of pine and clean fresh air of the mountain Wood starts a sizzling, spitting, crackling campfire For early morning hot coffee and a warm breakfast I Dress in tee shirt and swim suit, Hubby is in his wet suit We walked down to the creek Pull the dredge into the creek and get it started When he hits bedrock where gold might be hiding I stand beside the sleuth watching the Gravel run over the riffles I make sure the riffles stay clean So the heavy gold Will deposit behind them and on the mat I see the flash of color and utter excitement I yell, “We've hit gold,” impatient With my tweezers and small jar For safekeeping and I keep on cleaning When the day is done, tired, wet, and weary as a drowned rat We clean the miners mat into a bucket By the campfire we sit and pan our gold from the black sand After the hard day’s work we undertook, it is wonderful To see all the sparkling gold dust in my pan The same warm excited feeling I felt when my husband placed My gold wedding band on my finger 12/27/2014

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Date: 1/15/2015 11:58:00 PM
awes Eve, thanks for the compliment. PD
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/16/2015 8:49:00 AM
"Sweet Sugar Cookies and Peanut Butter Bars”, Written to entice the addicted sweet tooth like mines, you forgot coconut cake, and white chocolate doughnuts. God has blessed you with the pen.
Date: 1/11/2015 9:35:00 PM
EVE,, congratulations on your well-deserved win, enjoying the elements above. Always :) LINDA
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/11/2015 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, Linda, so much for the compliment from a true artist. Blessings eve
Date: 1/7/2015 2:23:00 PM
My friend, you deserve no less than a solid "7" for this golden beauty! Congratulations on a sweet win! Warmest regards.
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:34:00 PM
It was so much fun. Blessings dear friend
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:31:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita, I am glad you liked it. It was so much fun.
Date: 1/7/2015 2:10:00 PM
I knew it was going to be a winner. Congrats.Sara
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, for your confidence, I wasn't so sure. Blessings sweet friend
Date: 1/7/2015 2:43:00 AM
Love it Eve, congratulations on your win luv xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/7/2015 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Mandy for your visit :)
Date: 1/6/2015 9:25:00 PM
A journey back in time when lots of people panned for gold.......Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 1/6/2015 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph, this was a hobby I truly enjoyed.
Date: 1/6/2015 6:11:00 PM
I love this poem! Coming from Northern California, we have such a history of panning for gold, so it is something we have tried ourselves, and have taken our children to a few places that still give them this opportunity! Such fun, and a bit of history too !
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Carrie Richards
Date: 1/6/2015 6:38:00 PM
Nearby, about 30 miles up our highway, is a place called "Turtle Bay"......and they have wooden sleuths, and a place for children to pan for "gold" (or at least they think they are!)....It is a museum, and have a wilderness area, a great way to spend an afternoon! :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/6/2015 6:24:00 PM
Carrie, it is wonderful that you and your children have experience gold panning. It is a wonderful experience. There was a place in Oregon I think it was Wolf Creek, that someone or some company had left all their old equipment by the creek bed, the larges wooden sleuth I had ever seen .
Date: 1/6/2015 5:52:00 PM
You drew us a perfect picture of something I have never seen or done and ended with romance who could beat that! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/6/2015 6:09:00 PM
Debbie, thank you for the wonderful compliment, every single artist has really taught me a lot
Date: 1/6/2015 5:10:00 PM
Love this poem I added it to my favs, and I also noticed that I had not added you to my fav poets list so I did that too. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/6/2015 6:07:00 PM
Maurice, thank you, you are so kind, blessing to you
Date: 1/6/2015 5:05:00 PM
I am delighted to see this on the winners list Eve - many congrats my friend!!!!!!!:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/6/2015 6:06:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much my dear friend.
Date: 1/6/2015 3:01:00 PM
Congrats onthis fine win Eve...huggs
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Date: 1/6/2015 3:02:00 PM
Thank you, Kayod5.
Date: 1/6/2015 2:30:00 PM
nothing like a bridal ring... so well done, eve.. many congrats to you!
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Date: 1/6/2015 2:45:00 PM
Thank you, Nette,yours was outstanding.
Date: 1/6/2015 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations my dear Eve.Plenty of Love-Your friend Rajat
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Date: 1/6/2015 1:09:00 PM
Rajat, thank you so much for your wonderful comment. love Eve
Date: 1/6/2015 11:09:00 AM
Fascinating subject that you have tackled here, Eve, and I believe you are truly writing from experience. I have been entertained, and ultimately touched by your romantic ending! Well done and congratulations! // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/6/2015 1:07:00 PM
Paul, I did spend a lot of hours doing this with my husband. It was so much fun, and the end result was just wonderful. We were averaging an ounce and a half in a weekend; the most we took out of a creek in California was 3 ounces. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Eve
Date: 12/29/2014 11:41:00 AM
Precious and shiny is the Gold but most valuable is the love that shines in your heart! May your new year be filled with a love that never tarnishes. 7+
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/29/2014 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, David; your inspiring comments are wonderful. Happy New Year and Blessings to you and your family may all your prayers and wishes come true
Date: 12/28/2014 4:25:00 PM
Fabulous write Eve...Ive always wanted to try that as well...being a dreamer we know why.. does sound exciting but exhausting..hugs Tim
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/28/2014 8:24:00 PM
Thank you, Tim, for your compliment. It is a lot of fun but a lot of work. The children love the adventure too. Blessings and Happy New Year
Date: 12/28/2014 3:47:00 PM
Oh Eve....I LOVED this. You just had me intrigued from start to finish...but WHAT A FINISH THAT WAS! So sweet...so romantic. I hope you do well with this jewel of a write. Wishing you all the best...Hugs!!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/28/2014 4:17:00 PM
Thank you, Eileen, I'm glad you enjoyed my write. It is wonderful to be able to do things as a couple. "Sometimes “Blessings and Happy New Year and may all your dreams and prayers be answered
Date: 12/28/2014 2:04:00 PM
- Eve, this is perfect .... love it - Good luck in the contest, hoping it would win - I wish you and your family a peaceful and happy new year - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/28/2014 2:35:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. A hobby that did pay back. Blessings and Happy New Year and have a very safe one
Date: 12/28/2014 1:52:00 PM
My life long ambition...to pan for gold!! Ah well johnny lad, one day, son, maybe, one day. :) john.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/28/2014 2:31:00 PM
Thank you, John. It was so much fun, and yes, we did fine gold. You and your sons do need to do it. Wonderful memories to be made that will stay with you forever. Blessings and Happy New Year
Date: 12/28/2014 1:46:00 PM
Oh Eve I hope to see this one the winners list - brilliant take on the theme!!! Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/28/2014 2:38:00 PM
I would so love to have a god at panning for gold
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/28/2014 2:33:00 PM
Jan, thank you. This is one of the hobbies my husband and I did when I was in my 30's. Of all the things we did together, this was the best. Blessings and Happy New Year
Date: 12/28/2014 1:43:00 PM
Reads like a winner in the contest..Way to go ...Creative idea..Sara
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/28/2014 2:27:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. This is one of the hobbies my husband and I did when I was in my 30's Blessings and Happy New Year

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