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Going Home Ii

Twenty minutes from home---- We are returning home from space, A part of God's creation: a beautiful and awesome place! It's been a great flight for me and six others. Much was accomplished by my astronaut sisters and brothers. Nineteen minutes from home---- Flip the switches; watch the dials; Anticipate our loved ones smiles! I guess by now, we can easily be seen. These shuttle runs have become so routine. Eighteen minutes from home---- I'll be in church tomorrow,with my kids and my wife; Then I'll begin to resume my earth-bound life The computers have us right on course, And we are beginning to feel the gravitational force! Seventeen minutes from home---- A lobster for dinner (maybe I'll devour it whole) Everything's fine because I know God is in control. It will be nice to set foot on earth once again, And be joyously welcomed by our families and friends. Sixteen minutes from home---- Something's wrong! Thank You Lord that You said You would never leave me alone. Oh God! I'm Home! Originally written by me Feb 3,2003 after the Shuttle disaster upon re-entry Charlie Pelota HSLP

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Date: 9/13/2009 6:46:00 PM
Genuinely Talented Poet... Welcome To PoetrySoup... (Just like they Welcomed Me)... Isn't It Delicious... And This Poem is difinitely Meat and Potatoes... Loved It... MoonBee
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Date: 9/4/2009 10:45:00 AM
a powerful poem, and welcome to poetry soup thanks for your kin comments on my poetry and I look forward in reading more of your work God bless you
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:15:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Charlie. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and best wishes on your continued writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2009 5:11:00 PM
this poem is an awesome poem, done with grace and form. For all, God bless and keep up Faith, Robert A. Ball
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