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Going Going Gone

I own a shop within my mind That sells spare parts when I'm so inclined My rational like a junkyard heap Of twisted thoughts I cannot weep A quick fix for a festered soul I've a plastic widget made of gold And beneath that heap there is a well So dark So deep I cannot tell For in this well I threw my heart So battered and bruised It will not start I lays in there all shriveled and cold This well Is dry and very old I decided to sell this shop of mine With saline drops this well I shall prime And float my heart and cleanse my mind.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2016 9:40:00 PM

:) HOPE TO SEE YOU POST AGAIN

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2015 3:27:00 AM

- Hello Daniel :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2015 12:08:00 AM

Hi Daniel, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Daniel P Loiselle
Date: 10/23/2015 4:54:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words and warm welcome.

Skat A

Date: 10/19/2015 11:19:00 PM

Daniel, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Daniel P Loiselle
Date: 10/21/2015 5:33:00 AM

Thank you Skat for your kind words and warm welcome. I must confess that I had expected to be criticized and was reluctant to share. Thank you again, you are too kind. I will be certain to read your work and be in touch. Daniel