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Going Back In Time

One last dream is left... something I've pursued for long: to go back in time and see myself a young man, to get rid of this madness! Entered in Michael Falotico's contest, " Tanka Me A Dream " written by Andrew Crisci

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 1:25:00 PM
I'm probably saner now than I've ever been [sigh] sometimes genetics & circumstance make total sanity only a vague possibility? Perhaps you understand? Light & Love Always
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Date: 2/11/2011 12:45:00 PM
Nice dream you have going back to the young days , good luck in the contest,
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:16:00 AM
Think we all want to have this dream Andrew my friend.. an excellent entry into the contest ..and good luck with this reminiscent piece luv..
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:28:00 PM
I love this Andrew,It's one of MY dreams too!!!
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:10:00 PM
Nice write, but there's one too many syllables in the second line. Convert "I have" to "I've", and you make it under the wire.
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